Exclamatory Abuse

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Apr 2004 · Edited 24 Apr 2004 · 5 comments

SHUT UP! This is no desire! So let me go! Your hands are too cold! Your hands are too cold! For my warm heart! SHUT UP! This is just a dream! So float away! And leave this cold place! Leave this cold place! The warm room is only big enough for me! SHUT UP! This is no play! So please leave the stage! Your cold face stings my lips! Stings my lips! This is no desire, this is no dream, this is no play! So please step away! FROM ME...

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[9] Shuushin 24-Apr-04/6:52 PM Reply

"to[o] cold" quick - fix and repost.

[n/a] Blindpoetry › Shuushin 24-Apr-04/6:59 PM Reply

damn me and my grammar...

Thanks, again...

[8] wilco 24-Apr-04/7:26 PM Reply

nice title. fitting.

[9] Shuushin 25-Apr-04/10:43 AM Reply

unusual texture, conveys well.

[8] deleted user 25-Apr-04/6:17 PM Reply

We want authenticity these days. What ever happened to "All the world's a stage, and all of us goofballs actors"? Tell me to shup up, but I still see a lot of acting. And I sort of long for it to go away. Good thought.