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Exclamatory Abuse (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

SHUT UP! This is no desire! So let me go! Your hands are too cold! Your hands are too cold! For my warm heart! SHUT UP! This is just a dream! So float away! And leave this cold place! Leave this cold place! The warm room is only big enough for me! SHUT UP! This is no play! So please leave the stage! Your cold face stings my lips! Stings my lips! This is no desire, this is no dream, this is no play! So please step away! FROM ME...

Shuushin 25-Apr-04/10:43 AM
unusual texture, conveys well.




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