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The Observer (Free verse) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
I can influence the future
I am not alone
I am connected to it all
So you are too
It is my belief that our
purpose here, is to learn how
to be responsible creators
I have the freedom to be
woven into any possibility
Consciousness is the ground
of all being
through observation
I simply am
in heaven
I can go from
any form to any emotion
because they are the same
Atoms, ideas, strings
There is no reward
The mind is a storm
The cruelest tyrannical trick
we have played upon ourselves
is religion, war, disease, and ignorance
How far down the rabbit hole do I want to go?
It doesn't matter, as long as I go
And I want you, to come with me.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3142
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2005 11:51 AM PDT
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Comes off as somewhat pretentious, and loses its focus somewhat in the third part (after "because they are the same").