on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2006, 1:23 PM
It's got promise, and for most people, I'd probably give it an 8, but I've come to expect more from you. I imagine that you'll work it out.
on writer's block by Zoetrope
10 Feb 2006, 1:26 PM
very nice..at first I was put off by the length (I have a short attention span), but you pulled it off nicely.
on a waste of time by hendrimike
13 Feb 2006, 12:47 PM
Doesn't really say much as a whole that couldn't have been said in one verse. Mybe that's the point...hey, it's a mainstream pop song!
on Unless Redux by rahson_s
13 Feb 2006, 12:50 PM
I've seen you do better, but not bad. I think, though, if you're going to throw out the racial slurs, just go ahead and say niggers. "Niggas" makes it seem like you're trying to skirt the issue and use slang instead.
on Panic Slide by MacFrantic
13 Feb 2006, 12:57 PM
I'd like to see this formed into a more cohesive...um..thing..
on Conflict Resolution by Dovina
20 Feb 2006, 1:29 PM
I really like this one. The third stanza is perfect, but I don't like the garage door.
on Louwanda by Jeremi B. Handrinos
19 Mar 2006, 1:11 AM
babies havin' babies..
on Looking Back by x0lovelylarnx0
19 Mar 2006, 1:25 AM
Some good sentiments, but just not a very...ummm..daring? poem..just not too inventive...could be worked on and turned into something though.
on Indiscrete by ecargo
19 Mar 2006, 1:33 AM
super
on Martijn by Chasz Misleading
19 Mar 2006, 1:36 AM
I think you misspelled Martin's name.
Seriously, though folks. I think if you want to poast this for others to read, maybe shorten it and make it a little more interesting. Otherwise just give it to Martijn.
Seriously, though folks. I think if you want to poast this for others to read, maybe shorten it and make it a little more interesting. Otherwise just give it to Martijn.
on One Too Many by ElmoBeavisButthead
21 Mar 2006, 7:35 PM
I don't really think I can give you any better advice than Ranger already has. Follow his lead.
on Muff by Stephen Robins
21 Mar 2006, 7:39 PM
"I swear I saw an ewok, Grinning between your legs," is the funniest thing I've ever heard. 8 - just for that.
on Life Is Like A Rose by x0lovelylarnx0
21 Mar 2006, 7:42 PM
Good thoughts, but it's all been said before and in a much better way. Try looking for new ways to express your thoughts. Instead of just letting it flow onto the page, think about the line and think how you can say it in a different way.
on The Right Call by Dovina
21 Mar 2006, 7:44 PM
mmmm...okay.
on You can go no further. by Dovina
11 May 2006, 4:01 PM
What's this about the demise of the Ranker? I know I've been away, but that's no reason to close up shop ;)
on some deleted poem
22 May 2006, 8:21 PM
I suppose I should use your own voting system against you old-timer, but I just don't see the point. I suuppose the newbies will do that when you 0 all their poems. So, instead, I'm gonna give you a 7. Happy trails.
on Godproof Hat by Dovina
22 May 2006, 8:24 PM
I wish I had a God-proof hat. I always feel like He's watching me. Nice limerick.
On an unrelated topic, I'm ure glad I came back in time to see the return of Rockmage.
On an unrelated topic, I'm ure glad I came back in time to see the return of Rockmage.