| Re: Descendent by MacFrantic |
22-May-06/8:26 PM |
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Damn, that's a lot of rhyming...I hate that, but I guess I like it well enough for the words themselves.
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| Re: San Franscisco by John Rambo |
22-May-06/8:28 PM |
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| Re: Urinating in the alley by John Rambo |
22-May-06/8:29 PM |
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nope...but a 2 just for being a sick bastard.
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| Re: The balls of Thor by John Rambo |
22-May-06/8:30 PM |
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| Re: A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove |
22-May-06/8:34 PM |
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WOW! You ARE the most talented person on here! Are you George Bush?
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22-May-06/8:39 PM |
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| Re: Numbers add to nothing by Caducus |
22-May-06/8:43 PM |
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And millions of tax dollars wasted supporting some asshole for 34 years that could've been saved on his court date with 1 bullet.
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| Re: Play ball he said by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
22-May-06/8:47 PM |
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I don't want to read this....I'll just give you a 5 and we'll call it even?
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| Re: Seizures by Sunny |
22-May-06/8:49 PM |
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Never had a seizure, so I don't know..it sounds all right to me (the poem, not having seizures).
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22-May-06/8:50 PM |
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I hope this got you laid.
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22-May-06/8:53 PM |
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Dont call animals Mr. whatever...Mr. Robin, Mr. Cow, Mr. Platypus...I hate that...we're not 6 years old or retarded.
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| Re: Split Me by Sunny |
22-May-06/8:55 PM |
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soooo, you're cutting the carrot...and while you're distracted by the flowers, the carrot takes it's revenge and starts cutting you!? I don't think that's what you were going for, but that's the first image I got and I think that's super.
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23-May-06/1:54 PM |
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Hey, you've really improved since I've been gone. Good job. I like it.
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23-May-06/1:56 PM |
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I always enjoy your poems, pal. This isn't my favorite, but I like it okay.
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| Re: Monsters by wilco |
25-May-06/9:31 PM |
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| Re: What? (Wot?) by ecargo |
5-Jul-06/6:34 PM |
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I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds good.
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| Re: Bedlam Bazaar by Zoe |
5-Jul-06/6:39 PM |
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The translating was a bit annoying. I suppose it wouldn't be if I were Welsh...of course, then the English might be annoying...basically I think that you's have to be bilingual in that aspect to enjoy it completely. My personal preference is that you use one or the other...but I'm just one man. You've got some really nice imagery here and it's enjoyable as it is.
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| Re: Our Lady of the Rock by Zoe |
5-Jul-06/6:42 PM |
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The indentions are a little annoying, but not too bad. The poem itself is ace for the imagery and language. Subject matter is not really my cup of whiskey but I still like it just the same.
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5-Jul-06/6:48 PM |
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I feel where you're coming from here and it's actually not a bad poem. THere are some good lines S: 3 L: 3,4. However, there's just not much in the way of orinality...nothing I haven't read before...and on this very site, no less. I liked it, but I'm going to deduct points for that.
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| Re: The Angle of your Downfall by MacFrantic |
5-Jul-06/6:51 PM |
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Um..curiouser and curiouser? I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt that you're trying to be cute there. THe lack of punctuation is bothersome as well. I dig the rest.
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