on Descendent by MacFrantic
22 May 2006, 8:26 PM
Damn, that's a lot of rhyming...I hate that, but I guess I like it well enough for the words themselves.
on San Franscisco by John Rambo
22 May 2006, 8:28 PM
That's funny
on Urinating in the alley by John Rambo
22 May 2006, 8:29 PM
nope...but a 2 just for being a sick bastard.
on The balls of Thor by John Rambo
22 May 2006, 8:30 PM
eh...
on A Prayer For God's Soldiers As They Kill For Him by Edna Sweetlove
22 May 2006, 8:34 PM
WOW! You ARE the most talented person on here! Are you George Bush?
on some deleted poem
22 May 2006, 8:39 PM
What Nephredil said.
on Numbers add to nothing by Caducus
22 May 2006, 8:43 PM
And millions of tax dollars wasted supporting some asshole for 34 years that could've been saved on his court date with 1 bullet.
on Play ball he said by thepinkbunnyofdoom
22 May 2006, 8:47 PM
I don't want to read this....I'll just give you a 5 and we'll call it even?
on some deleted poem
22 May 2006, 8:50 PM
I hope this got you laid.
on some deleted poem
22 May 2006, 8:53 PM
Dont call animals Mr. whatever...Mr. Robin, Mr. Cow, Mr. Platypus...I hate that...we're not 6 years old or retarded.
on some deleted poem
23 May 2006, 1:54 PM
Hey, you've really improved since I've been gone. Good job. I like it.
on some deleted poem
23 May 2006, 1:56 PM
I always enjoy your poems, pal. This isn't my favorite, but I like it okay.
on What? (Wot?) by ecargo
5 Jul 2006, 6:34 PM
I have no idea what you're talking about, but it sounds good.
on Bedlam Bazaar by Zoe
5 Jul 2006, 6:39 PM
The translating was a bit annoying. I suppose it wouldn't be if I were Welsh...of course, then the English might be annoying...basically I think that you's have to be bilingual in that aspect to enjoy it completely. My personal preference is that you use one or the other...but I'm just one man. You've got some really nice imagery here and it's enjoyable as it is.
on Our Lady of the Rock by Zoe
5 Jul 2006, 6:42 PM
The indentions are a little annoying, but not too bad. The poem itself is ace for the imagery and language. Subject matter is not really my cup of whiskey but I still like it just the same.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2006, 6:48 PM
I feel where you're coming from here and it's actually not a bad poem. THere are some good lines S: 3 L: 3,4. However, there's just not much in the way of orinality...nothing I haven't read before...and on this very site, no less. I liked it, but I'm going to deduct points for that.
on The Angle of your Downfall by MacFrantic
5 Jul 2006, 6:51 PM
Um..curiouser and curiouser? I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt that you're trying to be cute there. THe lack of punctuation is bothersome as well. I dig the rest.