Re: Hugo by little_angel_maria	5-Jul-06/6:57 PM
Can't really say anythnig that hasn't already been said in other comments. Don't want to be unoriginal with my commments, now do I? Basically, this just reads like a letter you's pass to someone in High School. That's not really something that the average Poemeranker user wants to read (unless it's directed at them). So, that being said, just try to work on setting yourself apart.
Re: Songs of the hedge bird by ALChemy	5-Jul-06/7:00 PM
You give me a poetry boner.
Re: sayndewicches by FreeFormFixation	5-Jul-06/7:03 PM
These poems with no punctuation are starting to kick me in my ass. Good one, though.
Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger	5-Jul-06/7:08 PM
ace
Re: O say, can you see? by Dovina	5-Jul-06/7:16 PM
Nice job there, D. I think you should take the "pop that cracker" line and turn it into a rap song.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-06/7:29 PM
yeah, that sounds about right.
Re: canada day by Bill Z Bub	5-Jul-06/7:53 PM
The spacing works okay and there's something I like about it...still, just not overly impressed with this one Mr. Devil.
Re: Patio 95 by ecargo	5-Jul-06/8:05 PM
Damn, I really like this and don't even know why.
Re: A man’s life (My Life) by lol	6-Jul-06/9:32 PM
First, the gramatical errors in this are downright terrible and make it extremely hard to read. I understand the point you're trying to get across, but your thoughts aren't cohesive. It's like yuo just though of a line, wrote it down and then forgot what you were driving at. I'm guessing you're young. Try reading some other poetry to get an idea of how to structure and write. Also, work on your grammar because the way this is now, it just doesn't make a lot of sense. Also, if you want people to read and comment on your poems, don't you think it would be courteous to read and comment on some other people's works yourself?
Re: Someone Who’ll Know by Miggy	6-Jul-06/9:36 PM
Good grief Miggy, you'd think that as long as you've been doing this, you'd be getting better at it.
Re: The Willy Poem by Engelbert Humpalot	2-Nov-06/6:07 PM
What kind of ignorant shit is this. Jesus Christ I should've stayed gone.
Re: Footsteps by MacFrantic	2-Nov-06/6:10 PM
Okay, I'll buy that as a decent poem.
Re: The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	2-Nov-06/6:13 PM
how about "it's tire like that big-ass boulder from Raiders of the Lost Ark that almost ran over Indiana Jones at the beginning."
Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella	2-Nov-06/6:27 PM
I like this except for the title.
Re: Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20	2-Nov-06/6:31 PM
You know what the bad thing about something like this is that you're condemning the condemners ;) I agree with your thought here but when you're lambasting someone like this, you're really just mirroring the way they are.
Re: Blue, Black & White by oneglove	2-Nov-06/6:40 PM
The Blues Highway...drive it every day. Yeah, I'd call this a lyric..it reads like one and as a free verse I'd probably only give it a 5...but as a lyric it's an 8. Doesn't make sense? Sorry.
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	2-Nov-06/6:45 PM
You know I don't like these poems that are oozing Jesus all over me...so you'll forgive me if I hold my vote.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jan-07/7:14 PM
Where'd all your poemes go, Rock?
Re: New Year by wilco	12-Jan-07/7:16 PM
Came by, saw that Rockmage is back and just had to log in and post. Just something I wrote all drunk New Years Eve...just a little song. B F# E chord progression for anyone who cares.
Re: New Year by wilco	12-Jan-07/7:18 PM
Incidentally, this is my 91st submission with three years as a Poemeranker user nearly here, Feb. 18. I haven't been around much lately because I've been too busy to write, much less read. Seems the Ranker isn't doing too well? A pity. This place has given me a lot...I might even send Nentwined some money...but probably not.