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Someone Who’ll Know (Lyric) by Miggy
The only thing cooling me down is this six-inch fan But my heart beats ten times faster thinking if I can I’m not sure if she likes me or if I like her too Yet with past mistakes and ticking clocks there’s not much I can do (Chorus) This is someone Who I had never seen better days with This is someone who’ll know Thoughts pass me by if without her I can live This is someone who’ll know Friends have tried to capture her love just to leave in vain Between that and who else is out there it’s driving me insane I could be the same person around her I am like every day Because it’s my odd moments that’s keeping her at bay (Chorus) I’ve had a year of solitude hers was of regret From the way he left her as if she was never meant I don’t know how to ask here if she’s willing for a chance To be with someone who’s going nowhere fast (Chorus/ Ending)

Up the ladder: The Butterfly
Down the ladder: a waste of time

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10735
Posted: July 5, 2006 9:20 PM PDT; Last modified: July 5, 2006 9:20 PM PDT
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[3] wilco @ 24.92.74.122 | 6-Jul-06/9:36 PM | Reply
Good grief Miggy, you'd think that as long as you've been doing this, you'd be getting better at it.
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