Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

You, Me and that night (Free verse) by BrAnDiLoVesYoU
You say yes, and i agreed but what went wrong? fun, laughs and everything around us was a memory keeping close we danced through the night stars looking down, and the dark gray clouds hover above us, like guardians it ended with a special gift, it reached out and wrapped my arms but it came cold and shivers ran throughtout Best night for you and me Then you saw her, a girl who stole your sole My heart torn, in two disgusted to know your with her After greatness happened, and arrived but i guess thats not enough tears of sadness roll down slowly, like a stream of rushing water Nothing can help, nothing at all, no pain will ease only the vision of u, me and that night you are now disappeared into the white light where u must stay for life.

Up the ladder: Being The Best
Down the ladder: It Could Be Worse

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10757
Posted: October 13, 2005 4:26 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2005 4:26 PM PDT
View voting details
115 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001