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You, Me and that night (Free verse) by BrAnDiLoVesYoU
You say yes, and i agreed
but what went wrong?
fun, laughs and everything around us was a memory
keeping close we danced through the night
stars looking down, and the dark gray clouds hover above us, like
guardians
it ended with a special gift, it reached out and wrapped my arms but it
came cold and shivers ran throughtout
Best night for you and me
Then you saw her, a girl who stole your sole
My heart torn, in two
disgusted to know your with her
After greatness happened, and arrived
but i guess thats not enough
tears of sadness roll down slowly,
like a stream of rushing water
Nothing can help, nothing at all, no pain will ease
only the vision of u, me and that night
you are now disappeared into the white light
where u must stay for life.
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.5
Weighted score: 4.8340096
Overall Rank: 10770
Posted: October 13, 2005 4:26 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2005 4:26 PM PDT
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