Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!	10-Jan-07/1:54 PM
what a load of crap. i get the feeling youre not really a christian
Re: Fragrant Love by Engelbert Humpalot	10-Jan-07/1:52 PM
wow. if you really did this you're a bitch.but it does make a good poem.
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	27-Jan-05/4:09 PM
what the fuck?
Re: Activating your Infinity by horus8	27-Jan-05/3:54 PM
to much like a story
Re: Wake Up by unouluvme	27-Jul-04/11:29 AM
doesnt make sense? i didnt think so.
Re: Summers Breath on my neck by unouluvme	5-Apr-04/5:23 PM
what word could i use on the "soon to turn green" instead of the word "green"
Re: Im innocent by Horus9	2-Apr-04/4:07 PM
no...this is supposed to be what? funny? deep? i seriously dont like it.
Re: Zinnias are a funny flower by Bachus	2-Apr-04/4:02 PM
okay
Re: Las Gaviotas by Bachus	2-Apr-04/4:01 PM
REALLY REALLY nice!
Re: love comes but once by francis nor capule	2-Apr-04/3:27 PM
cutesy ish...most definetly not my style, but ill give you a 4 bc i dont judge to harshly
Re: Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom	2-Apr-04/3:25 PM
nice...cutesy a bit, but nice.
Re: lullaby by the indign	2-Apr-04/3:05 PM
This isnt my style, but it isnt bad...like the descriptions
Re: Oh No! by foothangingoutofass	28-Feb-04/5:47 PM
1. this isnt exactly deep. 2. Your name seriously scares me 3. okay the rymes need some work yeah, okay, i think a 1 will do.
Re: How to sleep sitting up by Bachus	28-Feb-04/5:41 PM
I really like this one. Not that i dont like it, but do the last lines work with the rest?
Re: Standing Still by capachijim	28-Feb-04/5:38 PM
is this 3 haikus? cause i think a haiku ONLY has 3 lines???
Re: simply missing by daggatolar	28-Feb-04/5:35 PM
I like it, the no-spaced words are hard to read, ut its got a nice ring to it
Re: Nude Reclining by cleverdevice	28-Feb-04/5:30 PM
what exactly are you talking about?
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	28-Feb-04/5:25 PM
Not one of my favorites, but i suppose that is because i prefer darker, more, um...sensitive poetry.
Re: Shark by cleverdevice	28-Feb-04/5:22 PM
How old are you?
Re: Shower by unouluvme	28-Feb-04/5:15 PM
thanks...i dont know, does it flow well enough? I cant tell cause its my own poem.