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Standing Still (Haiku) by capachijim
At a screeching halt,
Watching the rest of them go,
And me standing still.
A wanting to live
Rather than idly view.
Just lack all control
They all flying high,
Achieving their hopes and dreams,
And me standing still.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2027
Posted: February 28, 2004 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2004 2:13 PM PST
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