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Haiku № 92591

Standing Still

by capachijim

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

At a screeching halt, Watching the rest of them go, And me standing still. A wanting to live Rather than idly view. Just lack all control They all flying high, Achieving their hopes and dreams, And me standing still.

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[n/a] unouluvme 28-Feb-04/5:38 PM Reply
is this 3 haikus? cause i think a haiku ONLY has 3 lines???
[n/a] capachijim › unouluvme 28-Feb-04/7:12 PM Reply
yeah, it's a combo of three. Creative, no?