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Standing Still (Haiku) by capachijim At a screeching halt,
Watching the rest of them go,
And me standing still.
A wanting to live
Rather than idly view.
Just lack all control
They all flying high,
Achieving their hopes and dreams,
And me standing still.
Up the ladder:
Fingernails
Down the ladder:
Eat
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Posted: February 28, 2004 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2004 2:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2026 Comments:
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unouluvme @ 209.110.217.87
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28-Feb-04/5:38 PM
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is this 3 haikus? cause i think a haiku ONLY has 3 lines???
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capachijim @ 24.164.141.30
> unouluvme
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28-Feb-04/7:12 PM
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yeah, it's a combo of three. Creative, no?
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