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Standing Still (Haiku) by capachijim
At a screeching halt, Watching the rest of them go, And me standing still. A wanting to live Rather than idly view. Just lack all control They all flying high, Achieving their hopes and dreams, And me standing still.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2027
Posted: February 28, 2004 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2004 2:13 PM PST
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[n/a] unouluvme @ 209.110.217.87 | 28-Feb-04/5:38 PM | Reply
is this 3 haikus? cause i think a haiku ONLY has 3 lines???
[n/a] capachijim @ 24.164.141.30 > unouluvme | 28-Feb-04/7:12 PM | Reply
yeah, it's a combo of three. Creative, no?
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