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Standing Still
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Haiku
) by
capachijim
At a screeching halt, Watching the rest of them go, And me standing still. A wanting to live Rather than idly view. Just lack all control They all flying high, Achieving their hopes and dreams, And me standing still.
capachijim
28-Feb-04/7:12 PM
yeah, it's a combo of three. Creative, no?
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