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Standing Still (Haiku) by capachijim

At a screeching halt, Watching the rest of them go, And me standing still. A wanting to live Rather than idly view. Just lack all control They all flying high, Achieving their hopes and dreams, And me standing still.

unouluvme 28-Feb-04/5:38 PM
is this 3 haikus? cause i think a haiku ONLY has 3 lines???




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