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ONCE (Lyric) by jroday Once I had a heart so true.
But now It's gone from me to you.
So keep my heart as I have done.
For you have two.and I have none.
Up the ladder:
Bankruptcy
Down the ladder:
I Got the Romanian Flea-Bitten Blues
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Posted: May 18, 2004 7:46 AM PDT; Last modified: May 18, 2004 7:46 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2031 Comments:
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wilco @ 24.176.102.131
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18-May-04/12:26 PM
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This is better than the last one of yours that I read, but still, consider taking the advice in those comments.
Short, sweet, sentimental...and I like that in a poem...I am not the best poet around, I just write what comes to mind....edit when I need to and delete too lol...it all comes with practice...not a one of us are perfect....poetry all means something different to each of us...and as far as rhyming goes, a poem doesn't always have to rhyme....
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