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ONCE (Lyric) by jroday

Once I had a heart so true. But now It's gone from me to you. So keep my heart as I have done. For you have two.and I have none.

redneck_woman3322 23-Sep-04/5:06 PM
Short, sweet, sentimental...and I like that in a poem...I am not the best poet around, I just write what comes to mind....edit when I need to and delete too lol...it all comes with practice...not a one of us are perfect....poetry all means something different to each of us...and as far as rhyming goes, a poem doesn't always have to rhyme....




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