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ONCE (Lyric) by jroday

Once I had a heart so true. But now It's gone from me to you. So keep my heart as I have done. For you have two.and I have none.

wilco 18-May-04/12:26 PM
This is better than the last one of yours that I read, but still, consider taking the advice in those comments.




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