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Oh No!

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 Nov 2003 · 14 comments

This really will not doo I can not wear a shoe Not even if it is shiny brown People think of me as a clown A wiggling budge rudely protrudes Out of my bottom

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14 comments

[7] richa 16-Nov-03/4:47 AM Reply

Sylvia Plaths 'daddy' translated into chinese and now back.

[5] Shuushin 16-Nov-03/7:00 AM Reply

a pretty good, if done, image.

This kindof thing comes pretty easy to most people, even non-poets

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[0] hatedestruction 9-Jan-04/5:38 AM Reply

????rrrriiiiggghhhttttt.....

[n/a] LuV_jOhNnY 9-Jan-04/9:03 PM Reply

what the heck?

[0] Shade_dreamer 16-Jan-04/9:52 AM Reply

it looks like a computer randomly generated this from a livejournal.

And Apu said "Come Again"

[0] broken_wing11 25-Jan-04/11:48 AM Reply

Um... haha.

[2] DarkThirteens 20-Feb-04/10:14 PM Reply

Interesting.

[0] smlink84 26-Feb-04/9:03 PM Reply

yeah...thats great....BALEATED!!!!!!!!!! 0

[1] unouluvme 28-Feb-04/5:47 PM Reply

1. this isnt exactly deep.
2. Your name seriously scares me
3. okay the rymes need some work
yeah, okay, i think a 1 will do.

[1] niyama 8-Apr-04/5:16 PM Reply

OW MY EYE!

[0] edpeterson 23-May-04/1:34 PM Reply

by far the best poem i have read on this site. -0-

[1] Phalkon 26-May-04/11:57 AM Reply

damn... but you said "bottom" so i'll give you a 1

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[0] DustyStar 16-Jun-04/4:37 PM Reply

thats just gross

[0] Brittanyy 4-Jul-04/5:55 PM Reply

Ok this poem was just a bad attempt to be funny and well...It's not..Nice try champ better luck next time..