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Oh No! (Free verse) by foothangingoutofass This really will not doo
I can not wear a shoe
Not even if it is shiny brown
People think of me as a clown
A wiggling budge rudely protrudes
Out of my bottom
Up the ladder:
A song
Down the ladder:
People
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Posted: November 15, 2003 5:40 PM PST; Last modified: November 15, 2003 5:40 PM PSTWeighted score: 3.6385543 Overall Rank: 13575 Comments:
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richa @ 81.178.246.4
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16-Nov-03/4:47 AM
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Sylvia Plaths 'daddy' translated into chinese and now back.
a pretty good, if done, image.
This kindof thing comes pretty easy to most people, even non-poets -5-
????rrrriiiiggghhhttttt.....
what the heck?
it looks like a computer randomly generated this from a livejournal.
And Apu said "Come Again"
Um... haha.
Interesting.
yeah...thats great....BALEATED!!!!!!!!!! 0
1. this isnt exactly deep.
2. Your name seriously scares me 3. okay the rymes need some work yeah, okay, i think a 1 will do.
OW MY EYE!
by far the best poem i have read on this site. -0-
damn... but you said "bottom" so i'll give you a 1
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thats just gross
Ok this poem was just a bad attempt to be funny and well...It's not..Nice try champ better luck next time..
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