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Oh No! (Free verse) by foothangingoutofass

This really will not doo I can not wear a shoe Not even if it is shiny brown People think of me as a clown A wiggling budge rudely protrudes Out of my bottom

unouluvme 28-Feb-04/5:47 PM
1. this isnt exactly deep.
2. Your name seriously scares me
3. okay the rymes need some work
yeah, okay, i think a 1 will do.




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