poemranker ::simply missing by daggatolar

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Free verse № 92592

simply missing

Member since 2004 · Posted 28 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

My heart breaks Beats by heartbeat break; a pause They are after me Wait man hurries through Who is after me My own me after me How they do that They run after you runafter You till you runafteryou yourunafterrun Afteryou all by yourself alone Alone by yourselfalone Yourun afteryou not youinyou But they in you use you to runafteryou And as yourunafteryou, they are sure To be always afteryou Until, you cannot take it any longer Jump into the sea, the sea like Jonah Jumps you ou ashore, alone Spill your blood They like it, like free To be free from blame The blame reads in the report SUICIDE, they like it Like you would like it Not reading "SIMPLY MISSING"

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2 comments

[10] Shuushin 28-Feb-04/4:09 PM Reply
I really like this:

"Who is after me
My own me after me"

lots of originality here.
[10] unouluvme 28-Feb-04/5:35 PM Reply
I like it, the no-spaced words are hard to read, ut its got a nice ring to it