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simply missing (Free verse) by daggatolar
My heart breaks
Beats by heartbeat break; a pause
They are after me
Wait man hurries through
Who is after me
My own me after me
How they do that
They run after you runafter
You till you runafteryou yourunafterrun
Afteryou all by yourself alone
Alone by yourselfalone
Yourun afteryou not youinyou
But they in you use you to runafteryou
And as yourunafteryou, they are sure
To be always afteryou
Until, you cannot take it any longer
Jump into the sea, the sea like Jonah
Jumps you ou ashore, alone
Spill your blood
They like it, like free
To be free from blame
The blame reads in the report
SUICIDE, they like it
Like you would like it
Not reading "SIMPLY MISSING"
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.2980075
Overall Rank: 3714
Posted: February 28, 2004 2:18 PM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2004 2:18 PM PST
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"Who is after me
My own me after me"
lots of originality here.