| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
28-Feb-04/8:49 AM |
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feel free to give suggestions...i cant spell so youll have to ignore that part. Well, thanks for the comments!
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| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
25-Feb-04/2:44 PM |
i didnt really expect anuone to read/care about this... it was one of my "God, i am so bored right now, hummm...well, lets see what cool sites are on the internet..." poems. Haha. oh well...thanks for the comments!
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| Re: a comment on sunday morning precarious by andrewjthomas |
24-Feb-04/6:54 PM |
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ah, well, i liked this one...BTW, you have a son???
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| Re: sunday morning precarious by andrewjthomas |
27-Jan-04/3:09 PM |
uh...i like this one. Its kinda like a personal narative but, you know, like way better.
BTW: where did your piss test go??? :)
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| Re: Reconstruction by andrewjthomas |
26-Jan-04/4:19 PM |
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Huh. I am definitley not your biggest fan. But i like this one. 8 work for you?
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| Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
25-Jan-04/11:16 AM |
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Huh. Well...ill give it a five. Good, could be better, but good.
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| Re: A Glass of Water by Princess_Snowflake |
25-Jan-04/11:14 AM |
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LIked it. You must like water. I prefer pop or beer or chocolate milk or somethin. BTW, rockmage, do give everything a 10? Just wondering. Good job. ill say...7.
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| Re: P.M.S. by Princess_Snowflake |
25-Jan-04/10:49 AM |
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Interesting. Just a suggestion, when you get PMS, do something fun, instead of something that makes you realize how horrible you feel. Good Job, though.
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| Re: Martyrs in suburbia - (we wander like breezes) by zodiac |
25-Jan-04/10:46 AM |
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I liked it. Im no proffesional critic or poet. but i liked it.
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| Re: the small drop by richa |
25-Jan-04/10:42 AM |
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Loved it. Made me think. Its one of those poems that makes you read it again.
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| Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus |
24-Jan-04/5:57 PM |
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| Re: Some Thoughts Spilled - A Dreamers Cranial Chatter by Don-Quixote |
24-Jan-04/2:29 PM |
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This has nothing to do with the poem (sorry), but check out the poem "THe World" by HEnry Vaughan. Hes a old one. Tell me what you think by replying here or at one of my poems!
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| Re: Lonely Tears by broken_wing11 |
24-Jan-04/2:07 PM |
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Hey, your here too??? cool! anyway, like i said before...love your poem!
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