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A Glass of Water (Limerick) by Princess_Snowflake A glass of water
can stop your thirst
A glass of water
can take your stress away
and not make you worry
A glass of water
moves you to another world
with new thoughts and
clear your mind
A glass of water
replaces a frown
with a smile
on your face
A glass of water
replaces the desert
with a moisturizing ocean
and a glass of water
makes you sleep after
you are awake.
Up the ladder:
Driven
Down the ladder:
An Afternoon Walk
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Posted: January 24, 2004 10:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2004 10:13 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8509965 Overall Rank: 10569 Comments:
This is not a limerick.
And I felt good about the 10 you gave me, rockmage, until I started counting all the 10s you've given other people recently. What do you do when a poem is not say-nothing fluff like this? Do you have an 11 in reserve?
LIked it. You must like water. I prefer pop or beer or chocolate milk or somethin. BTW, rockmage, do give everything a 10? Just wondering. Good job. ill say...7.
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So 9 or 10 per day I chug
But I get more leverage
From the beverage
If I leave some ergot growing in the jug.