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Paradise (Free verse) by TLRufener
There is a little place
Far over the rainbow,
Past the wishing star,
And onward from Never Never land;
The water is crystal blue
Along the white sandy beach
And glittering palms
Wave in the summertime breeze.
Clouds never block the sun
As the rain pours down
And the air is always comfortable
Even when the breeze is away.
Flower always bloom
Along the forest trails
While sweet-sounding birds
Fill the sky with their songs.
Sunrise is just as beautiful
No matter when you wake
As the sun always rises
Just after you do.
Sunset is breathtaking
As it lowers over the waves
And you never miss it
Since the sun sets
Just before you do.
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Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10580
Posted: December 24, 2005 8:06 AM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2005 8:06 AM PST
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