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P.M.S. (Free verse) by Princess_Snowflake
I'm not acting like myself today I'm not feeling like myself today I'm not looking like myself today I'm just feeling sad, depressed and upset before I feel something flowing from my vagina I don't know why I'm feeling this way and being mad at people for nothing All I'm just feeling is angry and hurt without telling anyone I'm feeling my stomach laughing and crying before I start throwing up and my mind going backwards and feeling my vagina all achy and wet I feel so out of this place while P.M.S. is with me and not keeping me where I am It's very different like before while I'm crying in and out.

Up the ladder: Love
Down the ladder: when i met sky alone

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.428571
Weighted score: 4.846319
Overall Rank: 10618
Posted: January 21, 2004 10:28 PM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2004 10:17 PM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] basit_i @ 161.184.196.195 | 22-Jan-04/6:35 AM | Reply
Mneh.
[n/a] hatedestruction @ 167.196.165.62 | 22-Jan-04/8:31 AM | Reply
I can't relate, but it's a good flow
[5] zodiac @ 67.240.155.196 | 25-Jan-04/4:32 AM | Reply
I can't believe you reposted this.
[6] unouluvme @ 209.110.216.72 | 25-Jan-04/10:49 AM | Reply
Interesting. Just a suggestion, when you get PMS, do something fun, instead of something that makes you realize how horrible you feel. Good Job, though.
[5] andrewjthomas @ 192.150.10.200 | 27-Jan-04/2:16 PM | Reply
this is better than the coffee poem
you at least make the repetition work for you here
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