poemranker ::P.M.S. by Princess_Snowflake

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Free verse № 79941

P.M.S.

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Jan 2004 · Edited 24 Jan 2004 · 5 comments

I'm not acting like myself today I'm not feeling like myself today I'm not looking like myself today I'm just feeling sad, depressed and upset before I feel something flowing from my vagina I don't know why I'm feeling this way and being mad at people for nothing All I'm just feeling is angry and hurt without telling anyone I'm feeling my stomach laughing and crying before I start throwing up and my mind going backwards and feeling my vagina all achy and wet I feel so out of this place while P.M.S. is with me and not keeping me where I am It's very different like before while I'm crying in and out.

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5 comments

[n/a] basit_i 22-Jan-04/6:35 AM Reply
Mneh.
[n/a] hatedestruction 22-Jan-04/8:31 AM Reply
I can't relate, but it's a good flow
[5] zodiac 25-Jan-04/4:32 AM Reply
I can't believe you reposted this.
[6] unouluvme 25-Jan-04/10:49 AM Reply
Interesting. Just a suggestion, when you get PMS, do something fun, instead of something that makes you realize how horrible you feel. Good Job, though.
[5] andrewjthomas 27-Jan-04/2:16 PM Reply
this is better than the coffee poem
you at least make the repetition work for you here