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Echoes (Free verse) by malakin
Captivating minstrel fills the
night with magic
as friends share time and laughter
and each forget themselves for a while.
Somewhere nearby a last
breath slips past slightly
part lips, chapped and swollen
and a first breath explodes
with a cry and frail little hands
grasp at swirling shadows
and echoes of Pain and
echoes of Joy and
echoes of Loss and Love
and Fear and Peace
dance on the wind, but
in this place, all is
set aside for a temporary time
as the minstrel makes her song
and we each forget ourselves
for a while.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.785714
Weighted score: 4.8433447
Overall Rank: 10623
Posted: May 13, 2002 8:24 AM PDT; Last modified: May 13, 2002 8:24 AM PDT
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