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Free verse № 91390

Nude Reclining

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Feb 2004 · 2 comments

Poised and still Her body gently reclined Smooth skin as white as frost. Lips bursting With youthful resplendour Flushed red with desire. Sleek hair, jet black Like night outside. Eyes of deep, deep brown. Meandered hips Long legs slipping Arched, slightly Reajusting pose, Gliding and Sliding Draped, curved and fleshed. Vulnerability? In the eye of the beholder.

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[8] Shuushin 23-Feb-04/6:29 PM Reply
second to last stanza is what yer shootin fer - the rest leaves me nothing to imagine.
[n/a] unouluvme 28-Feb-04/5:30 PM Reply
what exactly are you talking about?