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Nude Reclining (Free verse) by cleverdevice
Poised and still Her body gently reclined Smooth skin as white as frost. Lips bursting With youthful resplendour Flushed red with desire. Sleek hair, jet black Like night outside. Eyes of deep, deep brown. Meandered hips Long legs slipping Arched, slightly Reajusting pose, Gliding and Sliding Draped, curved and fleshed. Vulnerability? In the eye of the beholder.

Up the ladder: Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger
Down the ladder: Sublime

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.75
Weighted score: 4.970199
Overall Rank: 8445
Posted: February 23, 2004 2:40 AM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2004 2:40 AM PST
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[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 23-Feb-04/6:29 PM | Reply
second to last stanza is what yer shootin fer - the rest leaves me nothing to imagine.
[n/a] unouluvme @ 209.110.217.87 | 28-Feb-04/5:30 PM | Reply
what exactly are you talking about?
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