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Nude Reclining (Free verse) by cleverdevice

Poised and still Her body gently reclined Smooth skin as white as frost. Lips bursting With youthful resplendour Flushed red with desire. Sleek hair, jet black Like night outside. Eyes of deep, deep brown. Meandered hips Long legs slipping Arched, slightly Reajusting pose, Gliding and Sliding Draped, curved and fleshed. Vulnerability? In the eye of the beholder.

Shuushin 23-Feb-04/6:29 PM
second to last stanza is what yer shootin fer - the rest leaves me nothing to imagine.




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