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Shark (Free verse) by cleverdevice I am a shark.
GRR GRR GRR
I like fish.
YUM YUM YUM.
I swim in the dark.
SWIM SWIM SWIM
My tail goes swish
SWISH SWISH SWISH.
My teeth are like knifes.
CRUNCH CRUNCH CRUNCH.
My eyes are like coal.
BURNING BURNING BURNING.
My body rises and dives.
UP DOWN UP DOWN UP DOWN.
I hunt for a shoal.
HUNT HUNT HUNT.
There its is!
THERE WHERE? THERE.
Feeding frenzy!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
A BIGGER SHARK!
Up the ladder:
#10
Down the ladder:
A Little Nightmare
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.7
Posted: January 7, 2003 2:35 AM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2003 2:35 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.35 Overall Rank: 3394 Comments:
I'll see your shark and raise you
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Send this to the Japs it might put them off their sharkfin soup, Thanks for enlightening me in the nature of Sharks.
(Thought this was about salesman) 7
i like sharks and this made me smile.9
Knives. The word 'knifes' is the third person singular of the verb 'to knife'. For insance,
"The disgruntled weaver knifes your face with some knives."
the little orca said to the poppa orca "faTHER IS THIS INDEED THE DAY KNOW SEALS WOULD FLY? BUT THEN LOOKING UP HE SAW ONE FLY BY, AND IT FLEW WELL".
funny.
How old are you?
18 next April, but check out some of my other work for maturity.
Not one of my favorites, but i suppose that is because i prefer darker, more, um...sensitive poetry.
I think you should split "My body rises and dives / UP DOWN UP DOWN UP DOWN" into "My body rises / UP UP UP / and dives / DOWN DOWN DOWN"
I actually ... this is funny, and not annoying. 224 view(s)
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*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH