Re: As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry	15-Aug-04/1:33 AM
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!
Re: Broken for Completion by Chasz Misleading	15-Aug-04/1:19 AM
not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*
Re: Fugitively Speaking by Dovina	15-Aug-04/1:18 AM
Like it a lot and that is that *9*
Re: Peppermint by fevriere	15-Aug-04/1:17 AM
Fantabulactifying! I think. *10*
Re: interlude by Caducus	15-Aug-04/1:15 AM
Too choppy and distracting, possibly too long. Now, the positives........... uhh, *7*
Re: Guess the place! by Patsy	15-Aug-04/1:14 AM
*10* Take the time to spell check.
Re: 30,000 and falling by That One	15-Aug-04/1:12 AM
Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*
Re: Hope in a Bottle by timtonio	15-Aug-04/1:10 AM
Good, except for the part about a lazy eye. *9* P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.
Re: Secret Love by ForgottenSoul17	15-Aug-04/1:07 AM
Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*
Re: Creator of Filth by hobojo	15-Aug-04/1:06 AM
What is this about? Your sister's period? Whatever. *6*
Re: Reality by Sirens_Voice	15-Aug-04/1:04 AM
Good idea... i myself like vagueness a lot. *8*
Re: Society by QuirkyWonder	15-Aug-04/1:02 AM
Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*
Re: today i just feel like swearing alot. But i won't. by Patsy	9-Aug-04/11:59 AM
*10.5*
Re: Reaction: Photo-Hung Over the Euphrates by eyrbare	9-Aug-04/11:38 AM
Wonderfully put, and I think that repeating "cold and black was perfect. *9*
Re: Mike Pike!! by DR Limerick	5-Aug-04/5:36 PM
And the coldness Mike's Pike didn't like *6*
Re: He Will Be Loved by eyrbare	3-Aug-04/10:47 PM
If Pinnochio had tear ducts he would weep and if I wasn't so lazy I'd rant. *5*
Re: nice day by New Life Drug	3-Aug-04/10:45 PM
I, in turn believe that the last line is fitting and I'd love to have you on my show. *9*
Re: May I? by cedand1	3-Aug-04/10:42 PM
Enlightening indeed, however vague. *8*
Re: My two cents by hobojo	3-Aug-04/10:40 PM
You're down two cents for that? Oh well, I would have put at least half of it into Viacom stock. *7*
Re: Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat	3-Aug-04/10:36 PM
Whenever I think of prose poem my train of thought just sto...