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Fugitively Speaking (Free verse) by Dovina
Itâs fine to say a surface thought,
It seems so very true.
But thereâs a fugitive inside
Whoâd have us hear another view.
She wants to talk, so let her speak.
Perhaps weâll find forensic clue.
As riddles roll, weâll test her heart,
And see good sense her thoughts undo,
Until they make themselves a part
Of fancies floating through her brain,
The long-lost ventures of her heart,
That send up answers, sometimes pain.
In pursuing her, thereâs always risk
Sheâll take offense, go far away.
Misrepresenting, sounding weird,
Could squelch the thing she wants to say.
As we spoke of vanished scenes,
Of what we once had thought and said,
Of what had been, and might have been,
And who was changed, and who was dead,
So it was we met and parted,
When thus dressed-up she came to test.
While true she was in many senses,
The true thing lay at rest.
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Posted: August 14, 2004 11:16 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 11:16 AM PDT
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