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30,000 and falling

by That One

Member since 2004 · Posted 14 Aug 2004 · 1 comment

We're 30,000 and falling The plane's engines blew out two converstions ago Stashed away in the compartments were your excuses what good are they now? Don't bother crying Tears become rain to the deaf at thsi altitude He cut the parachutes and still managed to get away what good is he now? You and I are 30,000 and falling I piloted this vessel as far as it could go Now it's time for you to take the lead. what good are you now?

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[9] MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/1:12 AM Reply
Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*