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30,000 and falling (Free verse) by That One We're 30,000 and falling
The plane's engines blew out two converstions ago
Stashed away in the compartments were your excuses
what good are they now?
Don't bother crying
Tears become rain to the deaf at thsi altitude
He cut the parachutes and still managed to get away
what good is he now?
You and I are 30,000 and falling
I piloted this vessel as far as it could go
Now it's time for you to take the lead.
what good are you now?
Up the ladder:
old friends
Down the ladder:
Me helping Me
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Posted: August 14, 2004 5:16 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 5:16 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6481 Comments:
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MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16
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15-Aug-04/1:12 AM
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Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*
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