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broodmood (Free verse) by lmp wet gritty drab grimy
ground.
oppressive dull leaden scudding
sky.
dank stale unmoving burning
air.
is it any wonder...
thoughts:
dark brooding ominous moody
Up the ladder:
Woman on the Stairs
Down the ladder:
Never born.
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Posted: December 30, 2005 1:18 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2005 1:18 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6463 Comments:
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zodiac @ 70.109.13.79
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2-Jan-06/7:42 AM
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Any poem with the word "scudding" in it gets an extra point from me.
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