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Secret Love (Free verse) by ForgottenSoul17
I look into your eyes
and I drown into their depths
I see into your soul
and I am tormented by its rage
I start to drown sinking deeper
and I am lost
Lost in the world you live in
and I can't get out
So much rage, torment and pain
and I try to heal you
You push me away though
and I try again
You keep pushing me away when I get close
and I hang my head in defeat
I still love you with a deep passion
and I must leave you so you can be happy
I become jealous of her
and I will let it pass
I love you so much
and you cant see that
So I will stay here in the dark
and hide behind my mask
Mask of solitude
and stay sad
Stay sad so you will be happy
and one day I hope you read this
Read this and remember how much I loved you
and heal my broken wings once again
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2580
Posted: August 13, 2004 9:01 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 7:04 PM PDT
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