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Secret Love (Free verse) by ForgottenSoul17

I look into your eyes and I drown into their depths I see into your soul and I am tormented by its rage I start to drown sinking deeper and I am lost Lost in the world you live in and I can't get out So much rage, torment and pain and I try to heal you You push me away though and I try again You keep pushing me away when I get close and I hang my head in defeat I still love you with a deep passion and I must leave you so you can be happy I become jealous of her and I will let it pass I love you so much and you cant see that So I will stay here in the dark and hide behind my mask Mask of solitude and stay sad Stay sad so you will be happy and one day I hope you read this Read this and remember how much I loved you and heal my broken wings once again

MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/1:07 AM
Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*




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