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Tragic Love (Sonnet) by WithoutLife
A tragic love Of one so true Flutters like a dove And leaves me blue. Words of love that is unspoken By the one I'm suppose to hate. Leaves my lonely heart broken. As time goes on, is it fate? A heart that can never be given away To the one I truly love, Must forever wonder astray Was it condemned from above? Loneliness do not befriend me, Send me the love one I cannot see.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2606
Posted: January 8, 2004 7:22 PM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2004 7:22 PM PST
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[8] little_big_nose @ 209.23.41.94 | 9-Jan-04/8:10 PM | Reply
tragic love is the only kind of love left in this world, sad but true, but i really liked this poem :)
[9] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 | 9-Jan-04/8:33 PM | Reply
once again... amazed by your words
[9] deleted user @ 208.28.223.38 | 28-Jan-04/6:18 PM | Reply
i really love this poem...very good
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