Re: Simple by wilco	12-Feb-05/7:22 PM
wonderful, absolutely wonderful! almost a favorite. *10*
Re: Provision by erin35	7-Feb-05/7:34 PM
somewhat decent *8*
Re: Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes	7-Feb-05/7:29 PM
it seems that you put about 2 seconds of thought into your poems. And that is not a compliment. *6*
Re: a comment on On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled by MacFrantic	28-Jan-05/10:03 AM
If you are familiar with them, all of my limericks come in unrelated pairs. And thank you very much
Re: a comment on Road of Means by MacFrantic	25-Jan-05/9:20 PM
The first stanza describes the end of everything. Just as a story is "all told" The second stanza says that the death of everyone is just a course of fate. And the title suggests that fate has nothing to do with it. :'o
Re: a comment on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams	17-Jan-05/11:59 AM
O.K. Smarter usage of semi-colons The second one is awful S3 L3-4 don't make enough sense. The contradictory statements about the people around him and then applying these statements to your own character. When trying to convey realization, you are actually making this character one of the "hyenas". Mostly recognized in the two contrasting "unaware"s. This would be brilliant if it was on purpose, but the quality of the poem suggests that it was not. Outskirts is one word st[r]ings Introducing the peoples' objectivity in the last line leaves readers a bit confused because it comes out of nowhere.
Re: a comment on Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams	17-Jan-05/11:29 AM
Well, if that is the entire reason behind this poem, than I'll give you a *6.5*. This message is tired and the outlet of lonely bum is only too predictable.
Re: Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams	17-Jan-05/11:21 AM
Okay, I respect the subtle anger at humanity poem, but it seems that this one is missing a good point *6*.
Re: Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	17-Jan-05/11:09 AM
put it under concrete and you've got a *9*
Re: a comment on Nectar of Infinity by MacFrantic	13-Jan-05/11:41 AM
I do.
Re: Cigarettes and Masturbation by Lifeboatman	5-Jan-05/10:10 PM
Apathy: Lack of interest or concern, especially regarding matters of general importance or appeal; indifference. Still a good poem, regardless. I still can't believe I took time to inspect your faulty contradiction by way of thesaurus. *8* P.S. Indifference: apathy demonstrated by an absence of emotional reactions P.P.S. I am a f**king loser.
Re: You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night by T. Jonathron Remp	17-Nov-04/6:28 PM
senseless and wonderful *7*
Re: a comment on Mice by MacFrantic	17-Nov-04/6:26 PM
That's because it isn't about mice. I'm glad you caught the metaphor. You're ridiculous.
Re: Cold Indifference by cuddlytiger17	21-Oct-04/10:02 PM
Quite "...", yes, quite. *9*
Re: A Better God by Dovina	21-Oct-04/10:00 PM
A very satisfying plan, if only it could be... *sigh* What the hell! I'm an atheist! *8*
Re: On the Discovery of Bacchus and Lovely Clothespins by MacFrantic	7-Oct-04/1:26 PM
This is my one hundreth poem on the site! Under three pseudonyms of course! Keep on keepin' on.
Re: The Shocker (or "Where to put your fingers") by Tits	27-Sep-04/8:50 PM
Two in the shooter One in the pooter Two in the fruity One in the booty Two in the snatch One in the hatch Two in the thrill One in the grill Two in the parter One in the farter Two in the tunnel One in the chunnel Two in the sponge One in the grunge Two in the fish One in the dish Two in the naughty One in the potty Two if she swallows One if she don't Two in the bush One in the tush Two and a tongue One just for fun Two in the lap One in the trap
Re: My Swarthy Bane by MacFrantic	15-Aug-04/8:12 PM
thanks, this much I-------------------------------I
Re: Outcome by Miggy	15-Aug-04/1:38 AM
I'll be honest...I didn't read it *6* Now I'll be dishonest...Keanu Reeves is a prolific pioneer of well acted films, and he should refrain from having his vocal cords and face burned/lacerated by chemicals, prefferably in pill form, blue or red. (I love irony)
Re: As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry	15-Aug-04/1:33 AM
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!