Cold Indifference

Member since 2004 · Posted 20 Oct 2004 · 2 comments

Swallowing my despondency I conjure up a smile Telling you it's all aright But I can only stay awhile You absently nod your head Oblivious to my dismay Place a cold kiss upon my cheek And fervently clear the way Forcing myself to react I lift my leadened feet Knowing this to be the last time My heart shall ever beat.

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3 votes so far. Yours would make 4.3 votes so far

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[9] MacFrantic 21-Oct-04/10:02 PM Reply

Quite "...", yes, quite. *9*

[n/a] cuddlytiger17 › MacFrantic 22-Oct-04/1:55 PM Reply

What's the dots? I'm taking its a good thing seeing how you gave me a 9. I'm still curious though.