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Cold Indifference (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17 Swallowing my despondency
I conjure up a smile
Telling you it's all aright
But I can only stay awhile
You absently nod your head
Oblivious to my dismay
Place a cold kiss upon my cheek
And fervently clear the way
Forcing myself to react
I lift my leadened feet
Knowing this to be the last time
My heart shall ever beat.
Up the ladder:
Some Thoughts Spilled - A Dreamers Cranial Chatter
Down the ladder:
Daddy's Little Girl
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Posted: October 20, 2004 6:57 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2004 6:57 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1589375 Overall Rank: 5112 Comments:
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MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16
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21-Oct-04/10:02 PM
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Quite "...", yes, quite. *9*
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cuddlytiger17 @ 209.105.159.188
> MacFrantic
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22-Oct-04/1:55 PM
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What's the dots? I'm taking its a good thing seeing how you gave me a 9. I'm still curious though.
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