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Outcome (Lyric) by Miggy I am floating
In the bluest
Feeling of lost
I am half-way
From my start
Came from where Iâll stop
Canât turn back
Let stress win
And die a normal life
Canât make sure
What Iâll see
Would be the only right
(Chorus)
Donât wanna be the sun
Just need to be a one
Just gonna change the outcome
No soft ground
Could help me
From being a gray
No weather
Would be here
Without a need for shade
The patience
Of my dreams
Left so long ago
The worries
Will spread out
With this needy ego
(Chorus)
The outcome
Of being myself
Hoping for the
Outlandish to melt
(Chorus/Ending)
Up the ladder:
Somewhere In Islam
Down the ladder:
Tripping Through A Paper Square
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.181818
Posted: August 13, 2004 12:09 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2004 12:09 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.090909 Overall Rank: 1158 Comments:
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ForgottenSoul17 @ 216.76.238.53
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13-Aug-04/9:04 PM
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^__^ Very good job! It really touched me, and I understood it very well...wow its a mircale...lol...GJ :) I give it a 10
I'll be honest...I didn't read it *6*
Now I'll be dishonest...Keanu Reeves is a prolific pioneer of well acted films, and he should refrain from having his vocal cords and face burned/lacerated by chemicals, prefferably in pill form, blue or red. (I love irony)
I like it, its really nice and I understand it soo much. Great Job!
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