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Outcome (Lyric) by Miggy

I am floating In the bluest Feeling of lost I am half-way From my start Came from where I’ll stop Can’t turn back Let stress win And die a normal life Can’t make sure What I’ll see Would be the only right (Chorus) Don’t wanna be the sun Just need to be a one Just gonna change the outcome No soft ground Could help me From being a gray No weather Would be here Without a need for shade The patience Of my dreams Left so long ago The worries Will spread out With this needy ego (Chorus) The outcome Of being myself Hoping for the Outlandish to melt (Chorus/Ending)

ForgottenSoul17 13-Aug-04/9:04 PM
^__^ Very good job! It really touched me, and I understood it very well...wow its a mircale...lol...GJ :) I give it a 10




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