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Tripping Through A Paper Square

Member since 2003 · Posted 15 May 2004 · 8 comments

Tripping through a paper square - - ing up to my obsession. My paint and brush will take you there. They all think that I do not care enough to make this confession Tripping through a paper square. My mind is ocean, my heart a tear - - ing fissure to a Neo-dimension My paint and brush will take you there. My love is not a thing you can wear Out of secular desperation Tripping through a paper square. I ride life at the edge to be more aware Of those that choose meditation... My paint and brush will take you there. We were not meant to be & never a pair You kept me like a boxed possession Tripping through a paper square My paint and brush will take you there.

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8 comments

[7] Sasha 15-May-04/3:05 PM Reply
guff
[n/a] Shardik › Sasha 15-May-04/3:18 PM Reply
Slot
[7] Sasha › Shardik 15-May-04/3:30 PM Reply
bow'ls
[n/a] Shardik › Sasha 16-May-04/2:14 PM Reply
Coon
[7] Sasha › Shardik 16-May-04/3:28 PM Reply
nut-nibbler
[n/a] Shardik › Sasha 17-May-04/6:03 PM Reply
Asshat
[8] INTRANSIT 16-May-04/5:25 AM Reply
more hyphens! smash the molds!!
[6] FreeFormFixation 29-Jul-08/3:02 AM Reply
i dont know if i want to be taken there.