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Tripping Through A Paper Square (Villanelle) by Shardik
Tripping through a paper square -
- ing up to my obsession.
My paint and brush will take you there.
They all think that I do not care
enough to make this confession
Tripping through a paper square.
My mind is ocean, my heart a tear -
- ing fissure to a Neo-dimension
My paint and brush will take you there.
My love is not a thing you can wear
Out of secular desperation
Tripping through a paper square.
I ride life at the edge to be more aware
Of those that choose meditation...
My paint and brush will take you there.
We were not meant to be & never a pair
You kept me like a boxed possession
Tripping through a paper square
My paint and brush will take you there.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.181818
Weighted score: 6.090909
Overall Rank: 1156
Posted: May 15, 2004 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2004 2:38 PM PDT
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