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Tripping Through A Paper Square (Villanelle) by Shardik
Tripping through a paper square - - ing up to my obsession. My paint and brush will take you there. They all think that I do not care enough to make this confession Tripping through a paper square. My mind is ocean, my heart a tear - - ing fissure to a Neo-dimension My paint and brush will take you there. My love is not a thing you can wear Out of secular desperation Tripping through a paper square. I ride life at the edge to be more aware Of those that choose meditation... My paint and brush will take you there. We were not meant to be & never a pair You kept me like a boxed possession Tripping through a paper square My paint and brush will take you there.

Up the ladder: Outcome
Down the ladder: Here In The Heart of Amber

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.181818
Weighted score: 6.090909
Overall Rank: 1159
Posted: May 15, 2004 2:38 PM PDT; Last modified: May 15, 2004 2:38 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 15-May-04/3:05 PM | Reply
guff
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > Sasha | 15-May-04/3:18 PM | Reply
Slot
[7] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 > Shardik | 15-May-04/3:30 PM | Reply
bow'ls
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > Sasha | 16-May-04/2:14 PM | Reply
Coon
[7] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 > Shardik | 16-May-04/3:28 PM | Reply
nut-nibbler
[n/a] Shardik @ 24.130.62.63 > Sasha | 17-May-04/6:03 PM | Reply
Asshat
[8] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.70 | 16-May-04/5:25 AM | Reply
more hyphens! smash the molds!!
[6] FreeFormFixation @ 98.212.148.58 | 29-Jul-08/3:02 AM | Reply
i dont know if i want to be taken there.
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