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Somewhere In Islam (Free verse) by Caducus
Somewhere in Islam
Lead filled stars shine
Expressions are camouflaged
From the men who sleep staring
At cirrus clouds at sunset,
Which travel from Kandahar
To a shore of wombâs.
Somewhere in America
Mothers cry like seagulls
Sonâs soar as ash
In to chalcedonic skies
As Daughters of Islam they went to save
Holler at their demise.
Yesterdayâs unfold like triangular flags
Buried eternal,
As body parts in body bags
and a half empty journal.
Somewhere in America
Proud men smile on mantelpieces
Next to polished medals and rusted urn's
All life ceases.
Somewhere in Islam
Under a golden dome
And whitewashed minaret's
A muezzin cries out to his brothers
Who fall on to pristine floors
As soldiers writher in jellied sand,
Somewhere in Islam.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.181818
Weighted score: 6.090909
Overall Rank: 1158
Posted: April 13, 2004 8:20 AM PDT; Last modified: April 13, 2004 8:22 AM PDT
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writher -> wither
in to -> into
minaret's -> minarets
urn's -> urns
Some good images here!