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On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled (Limerick) by MacFrantic
Somewhere deep in the woods of Japan Lives a group of black cats in a clan When they strike you'd best hide 'Cause to fight's suicide And they'd piss on your corpse if you ran At the fork in the trees where I ponder I am faced with which way I'm to wander The path to my right Is an awfully poor sight But the one on the left is much longer

Up the ladder: Cold Ones
Down the ladder: knocked down to look up

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7972
Posted: January 17, 2005 11:03 AM PST; Last modified: January 18, 2005 11:28 AM PST
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[8] REWellman @ 69.63.40.81 | 26-Jan-05/4:11 PM | Reply
Very funny little poem. I like the second stanza a lot more than the first and I think it could stand alone.

It's very cute.
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 204.98.2.23 > REWellman | 28-Jan-05/10:03 AM | Reply
If you are familiar with them, all of my limericks come in unrelated pairs. And thank you very much
[8] REWellman @ 69.63.40.81 > MacFrantic | 31-Jan-05/12:53 PM | Reply
Why is that? Is there a purpose to linking them together? Why don't you publish them separately. It would make it easier to read and appreciate them without comparing them to each other.
[n/a] Goad @ 217.226.20.184 | 31-Jan-05/5:05 PM | Reply
There was a reader who claimed his frustration
because twixt the limericks there was no relation.
But he shouldn't complain --
for 't'ain't all who can claim
they witnessed dada's revivification!
[7] PoeticXTC @ 205.188.117.10 | 14-Jan-06/8:11 PM | Reply
lol
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