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On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled (Limerick) by MacFrantic

Somewhere deep in the woods of Japan Lives a group of black cats in a clan When they strike you'd best hide 'Cause to fight's suicide And they'd piss on your corpse if you ran At the fork in the trees where I ponder I am faced with which way I'm to wander The path to my right Is an awfully poor sight But the one on the left is much longer

REWellman 31-Jan-05/12:53 PM
Why is that? Is there a purpose to linking them together? Why don't you publish them separately. It would make it easier to read and appreciate them without comparing them to each other.




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