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You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night
by Penelope Snip
How dare you
Open up the large gelatinous bubble suspending you from the top of the
cave made from paved jelly wave
And fall out onto my pony and pout
Something about how the Armies of Ovaltine
Were out to steal your submarine
And then just leave me stranded there
Like an orphaned bear
Without even a pane of lizard brain to keep me sane.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9229
Posted: November 17, 2004 2:06 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2004 2:09 PM PST
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