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You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night by Penelope Snip How dare you Open up the large gelatinous bubble suspending you from the top of the cave made from paved jelly wave And fall out onto my pony and pout Something about how the Armies of Ovaltine Were out to steal your submarine And then just leave me stranded there Like an orphaned bear Without even a pane of lizard brain to keep me sane.

Up the ladder: GONE
Down the ladder: Jai guru deva om

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.928861
Overall Rank: 9231
Posted: November 17, 2004 2:06 PM PST; Last modified: November 17, 2004 2:09 PM PST
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[7] MacFrantic @ 64.12.116.67 | 17-Nov-04/6:28 PM | Reply
senseless and wonderful *7*
[n/a] Bobjim @ 143.167.177.1 | 18-Nov-04/7:34 AM | Reply
I like this. I don't have to try and find any meaning in it and it's completely random.
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