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Ode № 118272

Nectar of Infinity

by MacFrantic

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Jan 2005 · 6 comments

Oh simple waters Green-blue prognosticator What for are you so salty? Daring to escape the coercion of time The rotting wood The worn and weathered stone How you survive them all Oh formless depths Caressing the cellar of life Why such depraved pretension? Swimmingly fraught with contempt The whole of man The chasmal preterition of death How you survive them all

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6 comments

[9] Shuushin 12-Jan-05/2:00 PM Reply
nice
[9] blacksoul 12-Jan-05/2:02 PM Reply
Very nice
[10] Lifeboatman 12-Jan-05/5:37 PM Reply
this is great... 10
[9] Dovina 12-Jan-05/10:05 PM Reply
It flows nicely and contains some awsome images, but altogether, it lacks motive and is too broad. It fails to pinpoint any real life issue.
[8] richa 13-Jan-05/6:18 AM Reply
The last verse seems a bit tacked on. The rest is very nice to read but you do know that people don't write like that anymore.
[n/a] MacFrantic › richa 13-Jan-05/11:41 AM Reply
I do.