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Road of Means (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Cataclysm boring holes Of lightless cold All told As the suits shouted "To others gone, but to others routed"
Down the ladder: fish eye pie
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Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12177
Posted: January 25, 2005 1:33 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2005 1:33 PM PST
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[n/a] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 25-Jan-05/2:32 PM | Reply
You're gonna haveta help me with this one I think.

I'm trying at least - ozone layer destruction?

It is a very nice start to something - but I think I need, or most people will need, more to get involved.
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 152.163.100.138 > Shuushin | 25-Jan-05/9:20 PM | Reply
The first stanza describes the end of everything. Just as a story is "all told"

The second stanza says that the death of everyone is just a course of fate.

And the title suggests that fate has nothing to do with it. :'o
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