| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
today i just feel like swearing alot. But i won't. (Free verse) by Patsy You give a yank on my
tailbone
and there goes my spine-
snakey, prehistoric
thing
slithering behind you
only slightly ahead of me
clutching along the grass
wondering how to go on
without the backbone
i never used.
Up the ladder:
Key to my heart
Down the ladder:
Doubtcohol
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.8
Posted: August 9, 2004 12:29 AM PDT; Last modified: August 9, 2004 12:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2145653 Overall Rank: 4382 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
Comments:
[10]
MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16
|
9-Aug-04/11:59 AM
|
Reply
*10.5*
Much too many questions this raises.
222 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
