poemranker ::today i just feel like swearing alot. But i won't. by Patsy

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today i just feel like swearing alot. But i won't.

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Aug 2004 · 2 comments

You give a yank on my tailbone and there goes my spine- snakey, prehistoric thing slithering behind you only slightly ahead of me clutching along the grass wondering how to go on without the backbone i never used.

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A favorite of MacFrantic.

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[10] MacFrantic 9-Aug-04/11:59 AM Reply
*10.5*
[n/a] basit_i 9-Aug-04/12:09 PM Reply
Much too many questions this raises.