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Peppermint (Free verse) by fevriere
We must mollify the grown-up child with two-dollar peach-colour silk-satin: sanctify her star-feet - we try to hide chipped coffee-mugs. How long can I stay, feigning affection for her scripted slips, her paper skirts? Her fingerpaint smile? Her decadent croute-dent, her pesto, her peppermint style? Like feline ivy clings to the wall, and climbs, and shivers in the breeze, and finds its roots fifty feet below, and can't come down.

Down the ladder: scene

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4579
Posted: August 14, 2004 12:00 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 12:00 PM PDT
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[10] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16 | 15-Aug-04/1:17 AM | Reply
Fantabulactifying! I think. *10*
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