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Peppermint (Free verse) by fevriere
We must mollify the grown-up child with
two-dollar peach-colour silk-satin:
sanctify her star-feet - we try to hide
chipped coffee-mugs.
How long can I stay, feigning affection for
her scripted slips, her paper skirts? Her fingerpaint smile?
Her decadent croute-dent, her pesto, her peppermint style?
Like feline ivy clings to the wall, and climbs, and shivers in the
breeze,
and finds its roots fifty feet below, and can't come down.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4583
Posted: August 14, 2004 12:00 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 12:00 PM PDT
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