Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Broken for Completion (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading
Don't tell me what I am. Don't tell me who I am. Don't tell me where I will go. Because I already knew. You just made me scared. I only realized this now. Because you put a block on my mind. It won't happen again though. Your words were once powerful. They are not now. I finally learned to teach myself. Are you proud? Are you scared? I think you've seen this coming anyway. Your attempts of prolonging were effective. But I am ready now. I am ready now. Let me go.

Up the ladder: Sunrise
Down the ladder: the leaving

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 10
.. 00
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5916
Posted: August 14, 2004 8:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 8:44 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[8] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16 | 15-Aug-04/1:19 AM | Reply
not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*
138 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001