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Broken for Completion (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading
Don't tell me what I am.
Don't tell me who I am.
Don't tell me where I will go.
Because I already knew.
You just made me scared.
I only realized this now.
Because you put a block on my mind.
It won't happen again though.
Your words were once powerful.
They are not now.
I finally learned to teach myself.
Are you proud?
Are you scared?
I think you've seen this coming anyway.
Your attempts of prolonging were effective.
But I am ready now.
I am ready now.
Let me go.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5884
Posted: August 14, 2004 8:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2004 8:44 AM PDT
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