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Broken for Completion (Free verse) by Chasz Misleading

Don't tell me what I am. Don't tell me who I am. Don't tell me where I will go. Because I already knew. You just made me scared. I only realized this now. Because you put a block on my mind. It won't happen again though. Your words were once powerful. They are not now. I finally learned to teach myself. Are you proud? Are you scared? I think you've seen this coming anyway. Your attempts of prolonging were effective. But I am ready now. I am ready now. Let me go.

MacFrantic 15-Aug-04/1:19 AM
not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*




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