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Sand (Free verse) by toward
I used to hear every step my soles used to burn what happened to my shoes my hat and clothes what else have I lost? what do I have left? from a dune's crest I see the ocean below cool blue fulfillment rub grit from my eyes trudge on she shimmers and smiles removes her rich silk tunic hands caressing perfect olive curves I love you, her moist lips say I am for you there is no you, I silently reply but I love you anyway forever faded memories wind-blown scent of food, of home pieces of songs I may once have known half-forgotten dreams that waft away from my fingertips I waken on my back millions of tiny silver fish slowly swirling in a black pool muffled conversations blow by my lover's whispers travelling away I next awake in midstep, in midday let me make it over this dune so that I can make it over the one after that

Up the ladder: Silent
Down the ladder: Spanish Woman

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5864
Posted: August 4, 2005 2:43 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2005 2:43 PM PDT
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[8] Bethy @ 24.222.32.157 | 4-Aug-05/2:57 PM | Reply
sand is hard to walk in sometimes eh...but we all do it... Bethy :)
[10] zodiac @ 213.186.179.127 | 6-Aug-05/3:29 AM | Reply
...During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. IT WAS THEN THAT I CARRIED YOU!!!!1!!
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