Re: Diamonds & Glass by shit	3-Aug-04/10:34 PM
Response to P.S.: I am amused but all I cared about was the "static star" and the last line. *7*
Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	3-Aug-04/10:30 PM
Worthy of a dice toss at least *12* wait...*2*...wait *8*
Re: Summer crush by sk8rs_rule_all	3-Aug-04/10:21 PM
Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha! Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know? But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
Re: Summer crush by sk8rs_rule_all	3-Aug-04/10:21 PM
Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha! Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know? But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	3-Aug-04/10:08 PM
If this is poetry...well... then I am unbelievable in the sack...and we all know where...heh, touchè. *7*
Re: Ellis Evans: Rhyfel- War by Sasha	10-Jul-04/9:40 PM
Is that the literal translation, or did it just happen to rhyme in English as well? *10*
Re: Sugared petrol isn't sweet if your ass is black & blue. by Y2kSlamPoet	8-Jul-04/12:22 PM
This should really be under prose, which I dislike when associated with poetry, but nevertheless... *6*
Re: a comment on Ulterior Not Alterior by MacFrantic	8-Jul-04/12:15 PM
I'm glad you didn't miss the fact that I use cliches purposefully. But it would be nice if you realized that arguements often dissolve into analogies and familiar "-isms", or cliches. Aversion of these was not my aim.
Re: a comment on Urbane Jane by MacFrantic	7-Jul-04/7:07 PM
Good eye! I thank you!
Re: a comment on Urbane Jane by MacFrantic	6-Jul-04/10:52 AM
Personally, I believe that "ego" alone works splendidly. You guys are right about changing "faltered"
Re: Poetry. by jonnyduk	30-Jun-04/8:59 PM
If you're going to take that title, at least make an attempt at something worthwile and/or somewhat pleasing to read. *5*
Re: Stuffy by horus8	26-Jun-04/6:41 PM
Maybe the feature song of a sitcom-style broadway play written by a gay Edgar Poe...but other than that, quite normal, if not abnormal. Wait! Oh. *8.1*
Re: a comment on Interrogation #1086637 by MacFrantic	26-Jun-04/6:28 PM
Thank you
Re: Thoughts Asunder by wilco	24-Jun-04/8:00 PM
Satisfying and all that. *10*
Re: a comment on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina	23-Jun-04/10:50 AM
My vote for comment of the month*******
Re: The Riddle of Creation by Dovina	22-Jun-04/11:01 PM
Congratulations on know knowing that you have have moved an athiest, with words, however disinterested in the message. *9*
Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1	21-Jun-04/8:24 PM
Almost had it for a street performer... Statue!? Oh! *heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*
Re: a comment on Time Imperfect by MacFrantic	21-Jun-04/7:04 PM
I preferred to use *bearing* In the context of *offering*
Re: Sonnetias by MacFrantic	21-Jun-04/7:00 PM
As a footnote, the suffix *-ias* means a speech, or figure of speech, designed to move the passion.
Re: Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina	21-Jun-04/11:57 AM
Wholesome house-building goodness. *9*